英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作:中考英語(yǔ)作文點(diǎn)評(píng) “night”指代不明

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寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)能夠充分考查學(xué)生語(yǔ)言綜合運(yùn)用能力的題型,也是中考中失分較多的一題。不少考生在練習(xí)英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作時(shí)不得法,又苦于找不到提高的有效途徑?v觀近年各地中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作題,題材一般是寫(xiě)人、寫(xiě)事、寫(xiě)物、寫(xiě)景、日記、書(shū)信、通知、便條等文體。一般來(lái)說(shuō),不同的寫(xiě)作題材,它的人物,時(shí)間,寫(xiě)作的重點(diǎn)也是不盡相同的,但學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中所犯的錯(cuò)誤卻基本一致。筆者在批閱2007年中考英語(yǔ)作文中發(fā)現(xiàn)諸多考生的作文出現(xiàn)了這樣那樣的問(wèn)題,我們先看下面考生的作文.

例: (2007年山東棗莊)以“Chinese Spring Festival”為題,寫(xiě)一篇短文。

考生作文

Chinese Spring Festival

The Spring Festival is China’s importantest① festival. It’s the longest holidays②. Most people go back home to get together with their families③.

Before the festival,people are busy prepare④ for it- buying things and cleaning the houses.On the night⑤,the whole family usually celebrate it,for example,they always playing firecrackers,eating delicious foods, watching TV and playing mah-jong and so on.During the festival, they visit friends and relatives, saying “Happy New Year” to each other,and go to park or temple fairs together .People also put on new clothes,and they say “Happy New Year” to each other,visit friends and relatives and go to park or temple fairs⑥. On New Year’s Day , people often eat delicious food jiaozi. Jiaozi can be made by most people including the old and the kids。

I like jiaozi very much.What about you?


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